Really like this :) Good Points: * Love the colour scheme, blue/black/white suits well with the boys clothes. * Posters and that, help well to attract so good idea.
Things To Improve: * The title should be larger than the sub-heading thing :) * The image does work well, but would be better with a direct mode of address.
Good points: * your cover is very original and would catch readers eyes by your great colour scheme and images. *I also like the little spots of light (dont know if thats just my eyes or something) but It looks really good.
Things you oould imrove on : -you could make the title of the magazine more bigger and go right accross the page, so it will stand out from the rest of the mag. -you could also add more text arround the to of th page as it looks a bit bare.
Really like this :)
ReplyDeleteGood Points:
* Love the colour scheme, blue/black/white suits well with the boys clothes.
* Posters and that, help well to attract so good idea.
Things To Improve:
* The title should be larger than the sub-heading thing :)
* The image does work well, but would be better with a direct mode of address.
Good points:
ReplyDelete* your cover is very original and would catch readers eyes by your great colour scheme and images.
*I also like the little spots of light (dont know if thats just my eyes or something) but It looks really good.
Things you oould imrove on :
-you could make the title of the magazine more bigger and go right accross the page, so it will stand out from the rest of the mag.
-you could also add more text arround the to of th page as it looks a bit bare.