Good points: * I like the size of your title and the colours you have used * your main image is really good as it shows the technical part of the music industry.
things you could improve on: -the images cover to much of the page, you should make them smaller or move them arround the page to create enough space for the text. -you could also get images of artists or bands wih instruments to make the readers know for sure its a music mag.
Good Points:
ReplyDelete* The fonts work great with the music genre you've chosen.
* The title stands out well and the colours really suit.
Things To Improve:
* Maybe squash the images a little to the left to fit more text in.
* The text needs to be easier to read :)
Good points:
ReplyDelete* I like the size of your title and the colours you have used
* your main image is really good as it shows the technical part of the music industry.
things you could improve on:
-the images cover to much of the page, you should make them smaller or move them arround the page to create enough space for the text.
-you could also get images of artists or bands wih instruments to make the readers know for sure its a music mag.